Lately, the poetry that I've been writing has been totally free verse, but this time I made a point of keeping a rhythm and rhyme scheme. I thought that I should force myself to do that more and I found that I like it more than I thought I would. Yes, it does give you boundaries, but they're the sort that help you to be more creative, I found. Sometimes when I write free verse, it's almost too much freedom; I become overwhelmed with possibilities. But if I have a certain amount of restriction, then I learn to work within that.... creatively!
The idea of this poem was inspired by the children that I work with. I have a nanny/housecleaning job for a family with lots of kids, and I often find myself taking care of (and playing with! :D) the four youngest ones (ages 1 - 6). There is something so precious about that age group; they are so simple, creative, content, and.... happy! Even though they can be mischievous, there is still a sense of purity and innocence about them that is unique to that young of an age. I've been working with these kids for quite a few years, so I have seen their not-so-good sides a lot, and have gotten tired out at times, but those things never seem to override the joy that I get from caring for them. And they teach me SO much about how I should be in many ways. Especially in the trusting aspect. :)
Enjoy! =)
Rosy Cheeks, Button Noses
By Zoe N.
Rosy cheeks,
Button noses;
Dancing feet
To laughter’s song.
Dirty hands,
And hunts for bugs;
Made up lands,
And soup from mud.
Life’s so free
When just a child;
All can be
A world of joy.
They don’t hear
A word you say,
As impure
Or devious.
Quick t’forgive,
With hearts to please;
Joy to live,
And quite content.
It makes sense
Our Lord asks for
Innocence
Like a child.
All through life,
A childe-like heart,
I do strive
To always have.
I’m at ease
In trusting Him;
All my needs
He meets and more.
As a dad
Sees his children,
Just like that
Does He see me.
Life’s so free
When trusting Him;
All can be
A world of joy.
Rosy cheeks,
Button noses;
Dancing feet
To laughter’s song.
Yeah I have some really young cousins right now. One of which is just learning how to talk. It's really cute (yes a guy said cute) to see her trying to pronounce certain words. It's amazing how innocent they are though.
ReplyDeleteWow, Dominic, you are such a faithful reader/follower! ;)
ReplyDeletehaha. I didn't know that it was possible for guys to say 'cute' lol :P. But yes, I LOVE it when they're just starting to learn to talk. Or even when they're exploring how to make different sounds with their mouths. SO adorable. :)